Tar2007 Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing
your advise?
Can you please make the necessary amendments on this letter?
Dear Mr. John,
As per our telephone conversation this morning, please find attached an updated report regarding the humanitarian crisis in East Timor. After making the assessment on East Timor, I believe that this area nowadays goes through a serious situation that needs an urgent interact of the international community.
Please note that the conflict in East Timor affects directly the nation’s stability and security. Therefore, it is necessary for the international organizations and the UN to make urgent steps that can help the people of East Timor to find last and just solutions in order to protect the interests of their country as well as to provide humanitarian aids such as provide innocent and civilians with food, clothes and safe place to live.
Please reply to us as soon as possible with your kind recommendation after making the needed assessment regarding the above-mentioned subject.
Dear Mr. John,
As per our telephone conversation this morning, please find attached an updated report regarding the humanitarian crisis in East Timor. After making the assessment on East Timor, I believe that this area nowadays goes through a serious situation that needs an urgent interact of the international community.
Please note that the conflict in East Timor affects directly the nation’s stability and security. Therefore, it is necessary for the international organizations and the UN to make urgent steps that can help the people of East Timor to find last and just solutions in order to protect the interests of their country as well as to provide humanitarian aids such as provide innocent and civilians with food, clothes and safe place to live.
Please reply to us as soon as possible with your kind recommendation after making the needed assessment regarding the above-mentioned subject.
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Hi, Here are some suggestions. Dear Mr. John, In accordance with our telephone conversation this morning, I am attaching an updated report regarding the humanitarian crisis in East Timor.
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Hi,
Here are some suggestions.
Dear Mr. John,
In accordance with our telephone conversation this morning, I am attaching an updated report regarding the humanitarian crisis in East Timor. I believe that in this area there is a serious situation that needs urgent intervention by the international community.
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