Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
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HI, Can someone please check the below summary. Also, does anyone find it really difficult to understand, especially the long summary? Please let me know your feedback, appreciate your help in advance.
Short summary
Three gossipy friends whose chief topic is one of their husbands find that gossip is merely a temporary escape from life’s trials.
Long Summary
Triz, Tiha & Nina are three close friends who like nothing more than gossiping about Razak - a doctor whose marriage to a flight attendant named Nora failed. Razak later marries Nina, the foster sister of his good friend, Solomon. Despite the escape they find in gossiping, these three friends nevertheless encounter their share of trials.
Short summary
Three gossipy friends whose chief topic is one of their husbands find that gossip is merely a temporary escape from life’s trials.
Long Summary
Triz, Tiha & Nina are three close friends who like nothing more than gossiping about Razak - a doctor whose marriage to a flight attendant named Nora failed. Razak later marries Nina, the foster sister of his good friend, Solomon. Despite the escape they find in gossiping, these three friends nevertheless encounter their share of trials.
Top answer
Looking forward to receive some feedback please. Thanks in advance.
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Looking forward to receive some feedback please. Thanks in advance.
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Hi all, can someone please check the following description. Thank you.
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It looks fine to me. I don't find any of it difficult to understand.
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Ok thank you, Jay. And one more thing, can you please re-confirm this..
...temporary escape from life’s trials. ( life's or lives?)
temporary escape from life’s trials.
...temporary escape from life’s trials. ( life's or lives?)
temporary escape from life’s trials.
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Temporary escape from life’s trials is fine.
Temporary escape from the trials of their lives would work too.
Temporary escape from the trials of their lives would work too.
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Blue JayTemporary escape from life’s trials is fine. Temporary escape from the trials of their lives would work too.Ok, so both would be acceptable. Thank you.
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