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Dear Committe Member: Thank you for becoming a member of ABC 2007 Festival. You're making a big step to help stabilize the current businesses and create a bonded community. Your assistance is greatly appreciated. I am writing to ask if we can meet on December 1 for our first meeting. Our meeting will be at the City Hall in the conference room at 6:00 p.m. Please let me know if you can attend the meeting. If not, please let me know a alternative date or two.
Thank you for your time in creating a stronger community. I look forward to seeing you at the meeting on December 1, 2006.
Sincerely,
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Dear Committee Member: Thank you for becoming a member of the ABC 2007 Festival. You have taken a big step to help stabilize our current businesses and create a bonded community. Your assistance is greatly appreciated.
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