Nancy1982 Posted 20 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Would you help me write this grammatically correct&make itlook professonal?
Thank you in advance for your help.
My name is CDE, and I work for the City of AB, . Currently, we are the effort of recruiting businesses, especially in the service sector and researcher center to the City and Dr. Smith at FE University referred me to you and said you are a great person I should speak to.
I’m planning for a business reception in December 30, 2006. The City experience a drastic change, our population has double in the last year, and current population is 26,000. Addition, we have approximately 400 acres of land available throughout the City. We, the City, want to invite the potential businesses owner, developer, representatives from the chamber of commerce and any person who has the authority to make decision about relocating, expanding, or open brand new businesses. Would you assist me in finding these people? We would like to invite as many people as possible. Do you know any person who’s currently looking for a location to expand their businesses or open a new business? If you have any recommendation or comments on how and where I can find these types of people, would you help me with it?
Thank you for your time and I look forward for your assistance.
My name is CDE, and I work for the City of AB, . Currently, we are the effort of recruiting businesses, especially in the service sector and researcher center to the City and Dr. Smith at FE University referred me to you and said you are a great person I should speak to.
I’m planning for a business reception in December 30, 2006. The City experience a drastic change, our population has double in the last year, and current population is 26,000. Addition, we have approximately 400 acres of land available throughout the City. We, the City, want to invite the potential businesses owner, developer, representatives from the chamber of commerce and any person who has the authority to make decision about relocating, expanding, or open brand new businesses. Would you assist me in finding these people? We would like to invite as many people as possible. Do you know any person who’s currently looking for a location to expand their businesses or open a new business? If you have any recommendation or comments on how and where I can find these types of people, would you help me with it?
Thank you for your time and I look forward for your assistance.
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Hi, Nancy. I'm not a very experienced writer, but I can give you some advice.
It's up to you what you do with it.
It's up to you what you do with it.
Nancy1982
Currently, we are the effort of recruiting businesses, especially in the service sector and researcher center to the City and Dr. Smith at FE University referred me to you and said you are a great person I should speak to.
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