Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? ( Sept. 21 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: You know, there's a popular sports shop on the second floor.
Why don't we go there?
F: Yes, I'd love to, but this bag is too heavy to carry around.
M: How about buying a new one, then? I know a good shop.
No. 2
M: Did you finish explaining ( about ) how to use this new machine?
F: Yes, but they still have some questions about maintenance.
M: Well, I hope it won't take too long.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: You know, there's a popular sports shop on the second floor.
Why don't we go there?
F: Yes, I'd love to, but this bag is too heavy to carry around.
M: How about buying a new one, then? I know a good shop.
No. 2
M: Did you finish explaining ( about ) how to use this new machine?
F: Yes, but they still have some questions about maintenance.
M: Well, I hope it won't take too long.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi; The dialogues are fine. " is correct.
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Hi;
The dialogues are fine.
Remove (about); "explain how..." is correct.
The dialogues are fine.
Remove (about); "explain how..." is correct.
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Thank you for your comment. I hope you'll give me comment anytime again.
kenta
kenta
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Suggesting the purchase of a new bag seems odd. How does that solve the problem of the heavy bag?
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