Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English, please? ( Sept. 11 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?
No. 1
M: Have you ever tried a Japanese ( -style ) bath?
F: No. I've heard we should first put hot water into a bathtub [ tub / bath ].
M: Right. We don't wash ourselves in it, and we don't run the water
off until the last member ( of the family ) finishes.
No. 2
M: This is a famous picture called "Rubin's vase."
F: I don't know. I can see just a vase in it.
M: Focus on the black part. You can see two people looking at each other.
F: Oh, it's an optical [ visual ] illusion, isn't it?
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Have you ever tried a Japanese ( -style ) bath?
F: No. I've heard we should first put hot water into a bathtub [ tub / bath ].
M: Right. We don't wash ourselves in it, and we don't run the water
off until the last member ( of the family ) finishes.
No. 2
M: This is a famous picture called "Rubin's vase."
F: I don't know. I can see just a vase in it.
M: Focus on the black part. You can see two people looking at each other.
F: Oh, it's an optical [ visual ] illusion, isn't it?
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
No. 1 M: Have you ever tried a Japanese ( -style ) bath? F: No.
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No. 1
M: Have you ever tried a Japanese ( -style ) bath?
F: No. I've heard we should first put hot water into the bathtub [tub].
M: Right. But we don't wash ourselves in it, and we don't drain the tub until the last member of the family finishes.
No. 2
M: This is a famous drawing called "Rubin's Vase".
M: Have you ever tried a Japanese ( -style ) bath?
F: No. I've heard we should first put hot water into the bathtub [tub].
M: Right. But we don't wash ourselves in it, and we don't drain the tub until the last member of the family finishes.
No. 2
M: This is a famous drawing called "Rubin's Vase".
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