Kenta Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English, please? ( May 16 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?
No. 1
M: Do you mind if I open the window?
F: No. But you wear just a tee. Don't you feel cold?
M: Never. I feel a little too warm.
F: Go ahead, then. I don't mind.
No. 2
M: Are you going to have fried chicken again? You had one yesterday, too.
( Q I think "had it" is wrong. Right? )
F: Yeah, why shouldn'I eat fried chicken?
( Q Do I need "a" before fried chicken? )
M: Don't you know? It has too much fat.
( Q Can I say "One has ..."? )
F: I don't care about that.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Do you mind if I open the window?
F: No. But you wear just a tee. Don't you feel cold?
M: Never. I feel a little too warm.
F: Go ahead, then. I don't mind.
No. 2
M: Are you going to have fried chicken again? You had one yesterday, too.
( Q I think "had it" is wrong. Right? )
F: Yeah, why shouldn'I eat fried chicken?
( Q Do I need "a" before fried chicken? )
M: Don't you know? It has too much fat.
( Q Can I say "One has ..."? )
F: I don't care about that.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi, No. 1 M: Do you mind if I open the window? F: No.
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Hi,
No. 1
M: Do you mind if I open the window?
F: No.But you wear just a tee. Don't you feel cold?
But you're just wearing a tee-shirt.
M: Never. I feel a little too warm.
F: Go ahead, then. I don't mind.
No. 2
No. 1
M: Do you mind if I open the window?
F: No.
But you're just wearing a tee-shirt.
M: Never. I feel a little too warm.
F: Go ahead, then. I don't mind.
No. 2
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