Would you correct my English, please? ( June 20 )

Hello. I wrote three dialogues. Would you check them, please?

No. 1

M: Hi, Kiyomi. Are you free Saturday night?

F: I'm not really sure yet.

M: Well, why don't we go to the baseball game between the Giants

and the Carp? Please let me know [ tell me ] if you can.

No. 2

M: Well, it's already ten o'clock and Ken hasn't [ showed ] up here yet.

F: But he said he would be here at ten thirty, didn't he?

M: Oh, did he? Now I see. We know he's always on time.

No. 3

M: Welcome back! How was your trip to China?

F: You wouldn't believe it. Everything went wrong.

M: Oh, really? Like what?

F: I had terrible stomach pain. Some food didn't agree with me.

Thank you. kenta