Kenta Posted 15 years agoGrammar
Would you correct my English, please? ( Jun 28 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you check them, please?
No. 1
M: How many are ( there ) in your family?
F: I have a big [ large ] family. There're ten.
M: Ten? Wow! Your parents are very busy, aren't they?
F: Not only they but also we, older sisters are!
No. 2
M: I hear you'll buy a new house. You must have saved quite a bit of money.
F: Well, actually, we had to take out [ make ] loans from the bank.
M: How long are you going to pay back?
F: More than twenty years. That's incredible!
Thank you. kenta