Kenta Posted 16 years agoGrammar
Would you correct my English? ( Oct. 2 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: Would you help me? I don't understand how to use excel.
F: What? Oh, then first move your mouse to that "tool"
and click.
M: Oh, you mean on the upside [ top ] bar?
No. 2
M: How about some coffee in the cafe? I'll buy [ treat ] you.
F: Oh, thank you.
M: Umm... this cafe is so jammed [ crowded ]. Shall we try another one?
F: How about having some coffee outdoors?
Thank you. kenta