Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? ( Nov.3 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: Don't you think his calculation ability would be an asset here?
F: Yeah. He has learned the Japanese abacus for a long time.
M: He has a clear advantage over someone [ anyone ] who uses
( desktop ) calculator.
No. 2
M: Hi, Yoko. You're wearing a nice scarf.
F: Oh, thank you. I wondered how I ( would ) look.
M: It really looks good [ nice ] on you. I like the color, too.
F: That's a nice compliment. You always make me happy.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Don't you think his calculation ability would be an asset here?
F: Yeah. He has learned the Japanese abacus for a long time.
M: He has a clear advantage over someone [ anyone ] who uses
( desktop ) calculator.
No. 2
M: Hi, Yoko. You're wearing a nice scarf.
F: Oh, thank you. I wondered how I ( would ) look.
M: It really looks good [ nice ] on you. I like the color, too.
F: That's a nice compliment. You always make me happy.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi, No. 1 M: Don't you think his calculation ability would be an asset here? F: Yeah.
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Hi,
No. 1
M: Don't you think his calculation ability would be an asset here?
F: Yeah. He's been learning the Japanese abacus for a long time.
M: He has a clear advantage over someone [ anyone ] who uses
a ( desktop ) calculator.
This whole dialogue above seems a bit stilted to me.
Are they talking about his speed or his a
No. 1
M: Don't you think his calculation ability would be an asset here?
F: Yeah. He's been learning the Japanese abacus for a long time.
M: He has a clear advantage over someone [ anyone ] who uses
a ( desktop ) calculator.
This whole dialogue above seems a bit stilted to me.
Are they talking about his speed or his a
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