Kenta Posted 16 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? ( Nov. 21 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: Could I use my cellular phone here?
F: I'm sorry but it's not allowed here since it may disrupt
our machine.
M: Oh, I see. I'll use it later at another place then.
No. 2
M: Is this the first time you work at a PC shop?
F: Yes. I grew up in a countryside and I wanted to work at a
shop like this in a big city.
M: Well, if you like this hob, you should survive.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Could I use my cellular phone here?
F: I'm sorry but it's not allowed here since it may disrupt
our machine.
M: Oh, I see. I'll use it later at another place then.
No. 2
M: Is this the first time you work at a PC shop?
F: Yes. I grew up in a countryside and I wanted to work at a
shop like this in a big city.
M: Well, if you like this hob, you should survive.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hi Kenta: Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
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Hi Kenta:
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: May I use my cellular phone here?
F: I'm sorry but it's not allowed here since it might/could/ would interfere with our machinery.
M: Oh, I see. I'll use it later at another place then.
No. 2
M: Is this the first time you have worked at a
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: May I use my cellular phone here?
F: I'm sorry but it's not allowed here since it might/could/ would interfere with our machinery.
M: Oh, I see. I'll use it later at another place then.
No. 2
M: Is this the first time you have worked at a
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Hi, I learned the difference between "machine" and "machinery" from your comment.
Thank you very much.
kenta
Thank you very much.
kenta
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