Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? (Mar.3)
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you correct them?
No. 1
M: I can't [ don't ] believe you! What do you think you're doing?
F: What? I'm just pulling out the weeds.
M: Don't you know what you're talking about? They are rosebuds.
F: Really? Oh...I'll [ I'm going to ] plant them again!
No. 2
M: I was poor when I was a kid [ child ], but I had a good life [ time ] with my family.
F: You mean the good old days were much [ still / even ] better than now?
M: In a way [ sense ], they were. But what's really important is you always have
positive attitude toward ( our ) life.
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: I can't [ don't ] believe you! What do you think you're doing?
F: What? I'm just pulling out the weeds.
M: Don't you know what you're talking about? They are rosebuds.
F: Really? Oh...I'll [ I'm going to ] plant them again!
No. 2
M: I was poor when I was a kid [ child ], but I had a good life [ time ] with my family.
F: You mean the good old days were much [ still / even ] better than now?
M: In a way [ sense ], they were. But what's really important is you always have
positive attitude toward ( our ) life.
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you correct them?
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Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Would you correct them?
No. 1
M: I can't believe this! What do you think you're doing?
F: What? I'm just pulling out the weeds.
M: Don't you know what I'm talking about? Those are rosebuds. *It would make more sense to say "rose bushes".*
F: Really? Oh...I'll replant them!
No. 1
M: I can't believe this! What do you think you're doing?
F: What? I'm just pulling out the weeds.
M: Don't you know what I'm talking about? Those are rosebuds. *It would make more sense to say "rose bushes".*
F: Really? Oh...I'll replant them!
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