Kenta Posted 16 years agoGrammar
Would you correct my English? ( Mar. 15 )
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1 At the library
M: What's the due date of this book?
F: It is [ It'll be ] checked out for 14 days.
M: I see. So I can have this until the twentieth of March?
F: Quite right. I hope you'll enjoy reading it.
No. 2
M: It's time to go [ you went ] to bed.
F: No, I want to stay up longer, Mom.
M: No, you can't. Put your toys away [ put away your toys ] and brush your teeth.
F: Oh, please. I want to do one more game.
Thank you. kenta