Kenta Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Would you correct my English? (Jan.30)
Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?
No. 1
M: Look! I('ve) got the top score on the video [ computer ] game.
F: I'm not interested in it. Shouldn't you study English?
M: Actually, I ( have ) finished studying for tomorrow's lesson.
Who made you my teacher?
No. 2
M: I wrote a report on how we can cut ( down on ) our labor costs.
F: I see. I'll look through it ans send it to the board of directors.
M: Thank you. Please tell me if they have any questions or comments.
I'll write my report again ( if necessary ).
Thank you. kenta
No. 1
M: Look! I('ve) got the top score on the video [ computer ] game.
F: I'm not interested in it. Shouldn't you study English?
M: Actually, I ( have ) finished studying for tomorrow's lesson.
Who made you my teacher?
No. 2
M: I wrote a report on how we can cut ( down on ) our labor costs.
F: I see. I'll look through it ans send it to the board of directors.
M: Thank you. Please tell me if they have any questions or comments.
I'll write my report again ( if necessary ).
Thank you. kenta
Top answer
I don't see any errors in your work. The last sentence seems a bit awkward though, how about something like this: I'll rewrite it if necessary.
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I don't see any errors in your work. The last sentence seems a bit awkward though, how about something like this:
I'll rewrite it if necessary.
I'll rewrite it if necessary.
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