Persian Learner Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Would you check my writing please?
Hi.
Hi Jenny.
I'm on vacation in India now and I'm staying here until this weekend. Unfortunately I'm alone here; I wish you were here to enjoy the trip to the full. Last night I sat up camp by a nice lakeside. I also saw two famous Indian actor and actress while I was there. Today it's very sunny, and I'm going shopping for some Indian nuts.
Guess what? I sent you a parcel by express mail yesterday. It has a pretty gift and some pictures from India that will give you a lot of information about this country. By the way, I don't have your new address so I sent it to your brother's address.
Jenny, I know that you are interested in Indian poetry, so I'm going to buy a poetry book from a brilliant poet for you. I forgot to say that I sent some videos from Taj Mahal to your Telegram last night. Did you check your cellphone?
In the end I should say that India is very fantastic, and its culture either.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
Sara.
I can't use perfect tense. Thanks.
Hi Jenny.
I'm on vacation in India now and I'm staying here until this weekend. Unfortunately I'm alone here; I wish you were here to enjoy the trip to the full. Last night I sat up camp by a nice lakeside. I also saw two famous Indian actor and actress while I was there. Today it's very sunny, and I'm going shopping for some Indian nuts.
Guess what? I sent you a parcel by express mail yesterday. It has a pretty gift and some pictures from India that will give you a lot of information about this country. By the way, I don't have your new address so I sent it to your brother's address.
Jenny, I know that you are interested in Indian poetry, so I'm going to buy a poetry book from a brilliant poet for you. I forgot to say that I sent some videos from Taj Mahal to your Telegram last night. Did you check your cellphone?
In the end I should say that India is very fantastic, and its culture either.
I look forward to seeing you soon.
Sara.
I can't use perfect tense. Thanks.
Top answer
Hi Jenny. I'm on vacation in India now and I'm staying here until this weekend. Unfortunatel y, I'm alone here; I wish you were here to with me so we could enjoy the trip to gether.
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Hi Jenny.
I'm on vacation in India now and I'm staying here until this weekend. Unfortunately, I'm alone here; I wish you were here to with me so we could enjoy the trip together. the full. Last night I sat up camped by a nice lakeside. I also saw two famous Indian actor and actress while I was there. Today it's very sunny, and
I'm on vacation in India now and I'm staying here until this weekend. Unfortunately, I'm alone here; I wish you were
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