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Hello. I wrote two dialogues. Will you correct them?

No. 1

M: Hi. I came here since you called me. What can I do for you?

F: Can you fix my bike? It has a flat tire [It went flat].

M: OK. I'm used to fixing it. You can depend on me.

No. 2

M: If we don't arrive at least 30 minutes early, I'm afraid the

theater will be full (up).

F: I don't think there's much chance of that. ? Do you come up with other expressions?

The movie is said to be uninteresting.

M: Really? Well, we'd better see something else then. ? Can I also say "some other [another] one"?

Thank you!

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

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No. 1

M: Hi. What can I do for you?
F: Can you fix my bike? It has a flat (tire).

M: OK.

No. 2

M: I'm afraid that if we don't get there at least half an hour early, the theater will be full (up).

F: I don't think there's much chance of that. They say the movie's not very good.

M: Really? Well, we'd better see something else then / go to a different one then.

Kenta · Answer

Hi, Mister Micawber. "get there" is used more often than "arrive there", isn't it? Thank you very much!

Mister Micawber · Answer

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In this kind of casual conversation, yes indeed.
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