would somebody check grammar & word use for me? thank you for your help

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I’m responsible for the City Economic Development. At the moment, I am working on Economic Development Strategy, some of the strategies included recruiting new businesses and nurture current business to stay in business. I believe the City need to get its name out and talk about the resources and incentives that the State and City offer. I am hoping to market the City, and create business partnerships for the City. Hence, I would like to begin to attend PSBA meetings to acquaintance with city business, and create partnership and find out what city can do to help the business to expand or stay in businesses. And if you don’t mind, would you confirm the next PSBA meeting? I have checked out the website but not really sure if it is up to date. And Do I have to pay any money for being part of the PSBA?

Anonymous · Accepted Answer

Try this:

I am responsible for the City Economic Development of [insert name of city]. Currently, I am working on Economic Development Strategies. This project includes recruiting new businesses and strengthening current businesses. I believe [insert the name of the city] needs to publicize its resources and incentives to attract potential customers. I am hoping to market and create business partnerships for [the City].

I would like to begin to attend PSBA meetings to familiarize myself with the [city] business, create a mutual relationship, and investigate the benefits that our partnership can offer.

At your convenience, please confirm the next PSBA meeting and send me the enrollment information.

----I hope this helps. "zoomom45"

Nancy1982 · Answer

Thank you for your help. That helps a lot.

would somebody check grammar & word use for me? thank you for your help

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