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wordy sentence ... to his cause
It was an inspiration to a lot of millions of people when Fox with his great bravery and devotion to his cause did his great run.
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-> His bravery and devotion during his run inspired millions.
--> His bravery and devotion causing him to run inspired millions.
I am trying to revise the above wordy sentende. Please give me feedbak. Thanks in advance.
-> His bravery and devotion during his run inspired millions.
--> His bravery and devotion causing him to run inspired millions.
Top answer
Fox's courage and commitment during his run inspired millions.
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Fox's courage and commitment during his run inspired millions.
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