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Kenta Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

Will you correct my English?

0Hello. I made two dialogs. Will you correct them?02br
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00No.1 In the office02br
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00M: Mr. Lennon wants to see you in his office immediately.02br
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00F: Did he say what he wanted to see me about? I guess it's about 02br
00 our new staff.02br
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00M: He didn't say anything. You'll know when you see him.02br
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00 No.2 In the office02br
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00M: Oh, it's already 11 o'clock. You haven't ordered the office 02br
00 supplies yet, have you?02br
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00F: No, not yet. Do you have something [anything] else to order? I won't be placing02br
00 [won't place] the order for another half hour.02br
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00M: Yes. We need more copying paper.02br
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00About No.2, can I also use anything instead of something? Which is better?02br
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00Thank you.0-
  

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1 In the office02font 02br 02br 01font 00M: Mr. 02font 02br 02br 01font 00F: Did he say what about? 02font 02br 02br 01font 00M: He didn't say anything.

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0Hi,02br
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00I've changed a few things to make these a bit more idiomatic, a bit more natural.02br
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01font00No.1 In the office02font02br
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01font00M: Mr. Lennon wants to see you in his office immediately.02font02br
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0You helped me a lot. Thank you!0-
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