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Please check the following sentences out. Which is accpetable or better?
(1) Mike, a young man with his yellow-dyed hair, sat in the seat next to the front door, listenting to his Walkman.
(2) Mike, a young man with his yellow-dyed hair, was sitting in the seat next to the front door and listening to his Walkman.
(3) Mike, a young man with his yellow-dyed hair, was sitting in the seat next to the front door while listening to his Walkman.
(1) Mike, a young man with his yellow-dyed hair, sat in the seat next to the front door, listenting to his Walkman.
(2) Mike, a young man with his yellow-dyed hair, was sitting in the seat next to the front door and listening to his Walkman.
(3) Mike, a young man with his yellow-dyed hair, was sitting in the seat next to the front door while listening to his Walkman.
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Hi, Please check the following sentences out. Which is accpetable All 3. or better?
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Hi,
Please check the following sentences out.
Which is accpetable All 3.
or better? #1 is OK. I prefer #3 to #2.
(1) Mike, a young man with his yellow-dyed hair, sat in the seat next to the front door, listenting to his Walkman.
(2) Mike, a young man with his yellow-
Please check the following sentences out.
Which is accpetable All 3.
or better? #1 is OK. I prefer #3 to #2.
(1) Mike, a young man with his yellow-dyed hair, sat in the seat next to the front door, listenting to his Walkman.
(2) Mike, a young man with his yellow-
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