Chenyincheng Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Which is better?
Hi all
Which of the following sentences do you think is better?
1. We are planning to further invest capital in our existing production facilities to improve production efficiency to cope with your growing demand for the product.
2. We are planning to further invest capital in our existing production facilities to improve production efficiency and to cope with your growing demand for the product.
3.We are planning to further invest capital in our existing production facilities and improve production efficiency to cope with your growing demand for the product.
4. We are planning to further invest capital in our existing production facilities to improve production efficiency - this will enable us to better cope with your growing demand for the product.
Any other suggestions or corrections are welcome.
Thank you in advance.
Which of the following sentences do you think is better?
1. We are planning to further invest capital in our existing production facilities to improve production efficiency to cope with your growing demand for the product.
2. We are planning to further invest capital in our existing production facilities to improve production efficiency and to cope with your growing demand for the product.
3.We are planning to further invest capital in our existing production facilities and improve production efficiency to cope with your growing demand for the product.
4. We are planning to further invest capital in our existing production facilities to improve production efficiency - this will enable us to better cope with your growing demand for the product.
Any other suggestions or corrections are welcome.
Thank you in advance.
Top answer
eg We are planning to invest more capital to improve the efficiency of our existing production facilities. This will enable us to better cope with your growing demand.
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eg We are planning to invest more capital to improve the efficiency of our existing production facilities. This will enable us to better cope with your growing demand.
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