Anonymous Posted 19 years ago
Grammar
What would be the best way to say this sentence?
Hey guys, I'm doing an essay on the Chrysalids and writing about the 3 plots of the book. However, I've come upon the thesis statement and I'm having troubles in making it a flowing and easy to read sentence of this bulky, hard to follow sentence:
The author has narrowed the book down to three main conflicts and these being, David having internal contradiction with himself; David and his friends against the Society of Waknuk; David and the people of the fringes.
thanks guys
The author has narrowed the book down to three main conflicts and these being, David having internal contradiction with himself; David and his friends against the Society of Waknuk; David and the people of the fringes.
thanks guys
Top answer
I’ll give a go: The author of the book explains that in addition to his own, David’s two other main conflicts are with the Society of Waknuk and the people of the fringes.
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I’ll give a go:
The author of the book explains that in addition to his own, David’s two other main conflicts are with the Society of Waknuk and the people of the fringes.
The author of the book explains that in addition to his own, David’s two other main conflicts are with the Society of Waknuk and the people of the fringes.
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