Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Letter Writing
What do you thing of my Application letter?
Can anybody give me some more tips ? THX
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Dear Miss Koo,
In reply to your advertisement on the internet, I wish to apply for the job of Instructor at your university. I look forward to putting my knowledge and experience into practice in the your school system
I see from your advertisement that you are looking for people with a good knowledge of and experience with computers and teaching. I have more than 5 years experience in the IT and 4 years in teaching.
I have a working knowledge of programming and teaching. I succeeded in making some programmes for Microsoft and took the networks of Harvard for my account.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to speaking with you about this employment opportunity.
Youth Faithfully
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Dear Miss Koo,
In reply to your advertisement on the internet, I wish to apply for the job of Instructor at your university. I look forward to putting my knowledge and experience into practice in the your school system
I see from your advertisement that you are looking for people with a good knowledge of and experience with computers and teaching. I have more than 5 years experience in the IT and 4 years in teaching.
I have a working knowledge of programming and teaching. I succeeded in making some programmes for Microsoft and took the networks of Harvard for my account.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to speaking with you about this employment opportunity.
Youth Faithfully
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Top answer
Dear Miss Koo Re: Instructor position I wish to apply for the above position as advertised with the university. Professionally, I have worked within the Information Technology sector for more than five years, including four years of teaching computer students. During this time I developed computer programs for the Microsoft Corporation as well as being the computer administrator responsible for network at Harvard University.
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Dear Miss Koo
Re: Instructor positionI wish to apply for the above position as advertised with the university.
Professionally, I have worked within the Information Technology sector for more than five years, including four years of teaching computer students.
During this time I developed computer programs for the Microsoft Corporation as well as being the compu
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