Thani Posted 13 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
were is my strength in the artical.
Write a persuasive essay (minimum of 250 words) convincing the reader that you will make a good teacher someday. Use the correct format for a persuasive essay:
There are different jobs in the world such as teacher job , doctor and engineering . The teacher job needs different skills in the teaching . It’s very interesting to become teacher and teach different age of students . All teacher must knew how to use different ways in teaching such as edmodo website and face book to help students to be an active and motivation . That’s help me to be an good teacher in the future .
Edmodo website is very necessary in the teaching students . All teacher must used this website to be an good teacher . Teaching different ways will help the students to learn more information and knowledge they don’t knew before . However , edmodo website help students to communication and share ideas in different countries . For example , when you don’t understand part of lesson , we can get chance to share it with other people . For instance , we can able to post video about the lesson , this will students to understand better .
Face book is very interesting website and this will help teacher to make a good relationship with students . It’s very necessary to use technology while teaching . They have different level of students in teaching . We have an quite students and excellent students . Maybe quite student shy to ask question in the class for example face book will help her to be more active and learn more . The most important thing in this website are connects with different counties . It’s easily to find the answer for your question . Technology encourage me to become an excellent teacher and make strong relationship with my student .
Some people say , technology not very important to become a good teacher .However , many teacher use technology to share the idea with student . Some people say , technology is very professional way on teaching . On the other hand , I think using different methods of technology such as edmodo and face book make me different . Most of teachers don’t knew how to use these technology in the correct way . Traditional way make the lesson boring and less attention for the students . Using these technology make my student more active , motivation and full attention . These will encourage me to be an excellent teacher in the future
There are different jobs in the world such as teacher job , doctor and engineering . The teacher job needs different skills in the teaching . It’s very interesting to become teacher and teach different age of students . All teacher must knew how to use different ways in teaching such as edmodo website and face book to help students to be an active and motivation . That’s help me to be an good teacher in the future .
Edmodo website is very necessary in the teaching students . All teacher must used this website to be an good teacher . Teaching different ways will help the students to learn more information and knowledge they don’t knew before . However , edmodo website help students to communication and share ideas in different countries . For example , when you don’t understand part of lesson , we can get chance to share it with other people . For instance , we can able to post video about the lesson , this will students to understand better .
Face book is very interesting website and this will help teacher to make a good relationship with students . It’s very necessary to use technology while teaching . They have different level of students in teaching . We have an quite students and excellent students . Maybe quite student shy to ask question in the class for example face book will help her to be more active and learn more . The most important thing in this website are connects with different counties . It’s easily to find the answer for your question . Technology encourage me to become an excellent teacher and make strong relationship with my student .
Some people say , technology not very important to become a good teacher .However , many teacher use technology to share the idea with student . Some people say , technology is very professional way on teaching . On the other hand , I think using different methods of technology such as edmodo and face book make me different . Most of teachers don’t knew how to use these technology in the correct way . Traditional way make the lesson boring and less attention for the students . Using these technology make my student more active , motivation and full attention . These will encourage me to be an excellent teacher in the future
Top answer
why no one answer plzzz
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thaniwhy no one answer plzzzProbably because there are so many problems. I have underlined some of them, although most of your text is repetitive or truistic and should be deleted:
There are different jobs in the world such as teacher job , doctor and engineering . The teacher job needs different skills in the teaching
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Mister Micawber there are so many problems. I have underlined some of them
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