Johanna Martinez Posted 14 years ago
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Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply to the International Business Management (MBA) program at ********* during the 2012 winter term. After living, studying and working in Costa Rica for 14 years, I am ready to explore new learning opportunities. Having reviewed several post graduate programs, I am confident that **** Business School has an excellent MBA program and that it best meets my personal and professional aspirations.
I have been working for the same company since 1998. In January 2000, I had my first international leadership experience when the company relocated me to the Isle of Man in the UK, to train a group of multinational employees for the European division. Since then, I have worked in various management positions within the company, leading groups of 5 to 100 employees. Networking with other company professionals has given me a better understanding of my abilities and the career I want to pursue. I have developed a genuine interest for business administration and people management and I strongly believe that enrolling at **** Business School, would provide me with additional set of skills that would help me establish a business consulting firm.
Obtaining a Master’s Degree in Germany and having the opportunity to learn a new language is important to me. In exchange, I will bring a positive attitude and a desire to contribute with my work ethics to the institution’s study program, while sharing back with those I meet, the Costa Rican culture.
Thank you for your time and your consideration. I look forward to joining **** Business School; I am confident that my dedication and discipline alongside with my professional and educational backgrounds, will be valuable to your program’s international focus.
Sincerely,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply to the International Business Management (MBA) program at ********* during the 2012 winter term. After living, studying and working in Costa Rica for 14 years, I am ready to explore new learning opportunities. Having reviewed several post graduate programs, I am confident that **** Business School has an excellent MBA program and that it best meets my personal and professional aspirations.
I have been working for the same company since 1998. In January 2000, I had my first international leadership experience when the company relocated me to the Isle of Man in the UK, to train a group of multinational employees for the European division. Since then, I have worked in various management positions within the company, leading groups of 5 to 100 employees. Networking with other company professionals has given me a better understanding of my abilities and the career I want to pursue. I have developed a genuine interest for business administration and people management and I strongly believe that enrolling at **** Business School, would provide me with additional set of skills that would help me establish a business consulting firm.
Obtaining a Master’s Degree in Germany and having the opportunity to learn a new language is important to me. In exchange, I will bring a positive attitude and a desire to contribute with my work ethics to the institution’s study program, while sharing back with those I meet, the Costa Rican culture.
Thank you for your time and your consideration. I look forward to joining **** Business School; I am confident that my dedication and discipline alongside with my professional and educational backgrounds, will be valuable to your program’s international focus.
Sincerely,
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I have been working for the same company since 1998. In January 2000, I had my first international leadership experience when the company relocated me to the Isle of Man in the UK, to train a group of multinational employees for the European division. Since then, I have worked in various management positions within the company, leading groups of 5 to 100 employees.
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I have been working for the same company since 1998. In January 2000, I had my first international leadership experience when the company relocated me to the Isle of Man in the UK, to train a group of multinational employees for the European division. Since then, I have worked in various management positions within the company, leading groups of 5 to 100 employees. Networking
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