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AngelTears6996 Posted 21 years ago

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0 Hold me in your arms, 02br
00were it is nice and warm. 02br
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00Come to me on rainy days. 02br
00Lay with me under, 02br
00a cosmic moon. 02br
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00Dance with me, 02br
00in the twilight. 02br
00To the beating of our hearts. 02br
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00I await for you, 02br
00by the willowed stream. 02br
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00Where i know, 02br
00you will come to me 02br
00as i dream. 02br
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00Jessica Lamb 0-
  

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0 I'll respond to this one, Jessica, because it seems to be the least creative of the love poems you have submitted here. I do not doubt the sincerity of your emotion, but you have not found a creative or distinctive way of expressing what are common experiences for all of us in our youth. To be effective, you need to express yourself uniquely.

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0 I'll respond to this one, Jessica, because it seems to be the least creative of the love poems you have submitted here. I do not doubt the sincerity of your emotion, but you have not found a creative or distinctive way of expressing what are common experiences for all of us in our youth. To be effective, you need to express yourself uniquely. There are no lines in this particular poem
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