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Reimon Posted 21 years ago

Two Amazing poems by D.L. Whited

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00She rises up from restless sleep 02br
00To greet another day 02br
00She wonders if he thought of her 02br
00As he started on his way 02br
00The first thing on her mind was him 02br
00And her love swells like a tide 02br
00She always starts her morning out 02br
00Wishing he were at her side 02br
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00She looks up with saddened eyes 02br
00To catch a lonely stare 02br
00The lost girl in the mirror sighs 02br
00And brushes back her hair 02br
00For just a brief few moments 02br
00She smiles a secret smile 02br
00Her finger reaches out to trace 02br
00I love you, on the tile 02br
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00Memories so bitter sweet 02br
00Go rushing through her head 02br
00Thoughts of how he held her close 02br
00As they shared the same soft bed 02br
00Music, wine, and candlelight 02br
00Making love at break of day 02br
00Then the sadness of A brave goodbye 02br
00As she slowly walked away 02br
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00She knew when it all started 02br
00Some days would feel this blue 02br
00Real love is worth the price you pay 02br
00And she knows this one is true 02br
00So she pulls herself together 02br
00As she whispers out his name 02br
00Not knowing many miles away 02br
00He's whispering the same. 02br
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00Parallels 02br
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00I saw an aging flower today 02br
00All alone and slowly dying 02br
00A single tear slid down my cheek 02br
00I felt better for the crying 02br
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00There is so much deep inside 02br
00That I keep hidden out of sight 02br
00Walls of pain that I put up 02br
00Built to hide me from the light 02br
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00Could you take away the hurt 02br
00If I reached blindly for your hand 02br
00Or would you simply turn away 02br
00And not want to understand 02br
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00So many reasons I hold on 02br
00None of which I can explain 02br
00But my time will one day end 02br
00Like a gentle summer rain 02br
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00I saw an aging flower today 02br
00All alone and slowly dying 02br
00A single tear slid down my cheek 02br
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00I felt better for the crying 02br
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00All i can say is...WOW 0-
  

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0 Wow. I am absolutely stunned. Wow.

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0 Wow. I am absolutely stunned. Wow. 0-
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If you write any further poems, please let me know when do check back on this page. You poems are touching on such an emotional level. You speak with more than your words.
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They're both great...
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These poems are the best I have read in ages
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Great poems, but is there really a thing called, A Brave Goodbye. As for me, all the farewells are weak !
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All i can say is...WOW
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This poem is just amazing it shall be cherished by many.
The Sweet DesertGreat poems, but is there really a thing called, A Brave Goodbye. As for me, all the farewells are weak !
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0I am so amazed about your parallel poem who old are you0-
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ABSOLUTELY AMAZING !!!!!!!!!!!
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i hate them both. predictable, unimaginative, not original
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