Rowaa Posted 17 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
TV And It's Influence
Hello Every One .. I wrote This Article about TV and it's advantages and disadvantages, so i hope you read it and get benefit ..
and if there something you want to tell me about it , please write a comment ..
Each device has advantages and disadvantages..TV is probably one of the greatest inventions of mankind of all times, Everybody knows what television is …
But it also can affect us in many bad ways as well as good ways, but it depends on us what are we watching and how much time do we spend on watching TV .. It's a huge source of informations, knowledge and entertainment, for example, science programs, new information from all over the world, in one hand, but in the other hand it has many disadvantages, it could destroy our creative way of thinking.
People spend too much time watching stupid programs and shows, which kill their free time in silly ways.
Moreover, the whole families watch TV eating dinner, spending their free time in this way, instead of going to the park, to the lake or for a trip, widing the gabs between the family members.
Additionally, watching TV could decrease the reading quantity, or any other hobby .
In conlution, I think that TV is a great invention , it has so many great ways to explore the whole world and to know so much about other communities and their tradition habits as well.
However, it could affect us in so many wrongs way , but we're the ones who have the remote control and the ones who decide, so I wish that all of you will pick the right direction!!!
Rowaa Suleiman
and if there something you want to tell me about it , please write a comment ..
Each device has advantages and disadvantages..TV is probably one of the greatest inventions of mankind of all times, Everybody knows what television is …
But it also can affect us in many bad ways as well as good ways, but it depends on us what are we watching and how much time do we spend on watching TV .. It's a huge source of informations, knowledge and entertainment, for example, science programs, new information from all over the world, in one hand, but in the other hand it has many disadvantages, it could destroy our creative way of thinking.
People spend too much time watching stupid programs and shows, which kill their free time in silly ways.
Moreover, the whole families watch TV eating dinner, spending their free time in this way, instead of going to the park, to the lake or for a trip, widing the gabs between the family members.
Additionally, watching TV could decrease the reading quantity, or any other hobby .
In conlution, I think that TV is a great invention , it has so many great ways to explore the whole world and to know so much about other communities and their tradition habits as well.
However, it could affect us in so many wrongs way , but we're the ones who have the remote control and the ones who decide, so I wish that all of you will pick the right direction!!!
Rowaa Suleiman
Top answer
Each device has advantages and disadvantages. TV is probably one of the greatest inventions of mankind of all times, Everybody knows what television is… But it also can affect us in many bad ways as well as good ways, but it depends on us what are we watching and how much time we spend on watching TV .. It's a huge source of information, knowledge and entertainment: for example, science programs, new information from all over the world, on one hand, but on the other hand it has many disadvantages, it could destroy our creative way of thinking.
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Each device has advantages and disadvantages. TV is probably one of the greatest inventions of mankind of all times, Everybody knows what television is…
But it also can affect us in many bad ways as well as good ways, but it depends on us what are we watching and how much time we spend on watching TV .. It's a huge source of information, knowledge and entertainment: for example, science
But it also can affect us in many bad ways as well as good ways, but it depends on us what are we watching and how much time we spend on watching TV .. It's a huge source of information, knowledge and entertainment: for example, science
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Hi Rowaa,
I think your essay needs to be broken into paragraphs.
Make sure you use proper punctuation. A sentence ends with a period/full stop (.) not .. or ..., and the new sentence starts with a capital letter.
Although most people agree you can start a sentence with "But" you should not start many that way.
You want the word "Its" not "It's"
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I think your essay needs to be broken into paragraphs.
Make sure you use proper punctuation. A sentence ends with a period/full stop (.) not .. or ..., and the new sentence starts with a capital letter.
Although most people agree you can start a sentence with "But" you should not start many that way.
You want the word "Its" not "It's"
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hey G.G,, how are you ??
thanks a lot for your advice,and i did what you told me .. actually i read the essay in the class, and the teacher told me that it's excellant and she wants me to give it to her .. you really benefit me.
thanks again
(if there is another thing about it tell me please)
here it is:
Each device has advantages and disadvantages. T
thanks a lot for your advice,and i did what you told me .. actually i read the essay in the class, and the teacher told me that it's excellant and she wants me to give it to her .. you really benefit me.
thanks again
(if there is another thing about it tell me please)
here it is:
Each device has advantages and disadvantages. T
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Every device has advantages and disadvantages. TV is probably one of mankind's greatest inventions of mankind of all time. s, Everybody knows what television is, but it also can affect us in many bad ways as well as good ways. , but i It depends on us what are we watching on TV and how much time
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All technological devices have advantages and disadvantages.TV is probably one of the greatest inventions of mankind of all times. Everybody knows what television is but it can ALSO affect us in many bad ways as well as good ways. HOWEVER, what we WATCH and how much time do we spend on watching TV DEPENDS ON US.
ON THE ONE HAND, it's ahuge??/IM
ON THE ONE HAND, it's a
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