Moongazer Posted 15 years ago
Please help me in doing this I need some suggestions and please fix my poem if i made mistakes.
it should be 5 stanzas with 4 lines
I already start ted this stanzas:
Oh God the mighty God
You gave me the best kind of love
You gave me joy when i'm in pain
You gave me strength when i am weak
You made the light that makes me see
You made the humans that makes me want to live
You made the breath-taking landscapes that makes me dream
Oh God the creator you are so extraordinary
Essay & Composition Writing
This is a poem about God as my inspiration
Please help me in doing this I need some suggestions and please fix my poem if i made mistakes.
it should be 5 stanzas with 4 lines
I already start ted this stanzas:
Oh God the mighty God
You gave me the best kind of love
You gave me joy when i'm in pain
You gave me strength when i am weak
You made the light that makes me see
You made the humans that makes me want to live
You made the breath-taking landscapes that makes me dream
Oh God the creator you are so extraordinary
Top answer
This does not seem to be a poem; it is a prose panegyric with each sentence in a new line. What is your meter? What is your rhyme scheme?
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This does not seem to be a poem; it is a prose panegyric with each sentence in a new line. What is your meter? What is your rhyme scheme?
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