Kk Posted 21 years ago
Grammar
The usage of English
Hello,
Please, can you help me check these sentences.
I am not sure whether they conform to the usage of authentic Englsih.
Thank you for your help.
Human beings desire to know celebrities’privacies
Most reporters strive to unveil secrets of celebrities’ privacies to satisfy audience’s needs.
What is the main purpose of establishing the magazine is to bring celebrities’ privacies to light.
Journalists in the magazine spare no energy in unmasking and exposing public figures’ scandals especially extramarital affairs.
If audience would haven’t eliminated the habit of peep at celebrities’ privacies, media has still continued to disclose their privacies.
Please, can you help me check these sentences.
I am not sure whether they conform to the usage of authentic Englsih.
Thank you for your help.
Human beings desire to know celebrities’privacies
Most reporters strive to unveil secrets of celebrities’ privacies to satisfy audience’s needs.
What is the main purpose of establishing the magazine is to bring celebrities’ privacies to light.
Journalists in the magazine spare no energy in unmasking and exposing public figures’ scandals especially extramarital affairs.
If audience would haven’t eliminated the habit of peep at celebrities’ privacies, media has still continued to disclose their privacies.
Top answer
You need to use 'private lives' instead of privacies (which is not a noun).
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You need to use 'private lives' instead of privacies (which is not a noun).
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