Vincent Teo Posted 17 years ago
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One day, my little boy seemed disturbed and kept crying and mumbling. I realized he had been "disturbed" by someone. In other words, something spiritual was disturbing him, so I prayed hard that night and asked for a sign so that I could know what it was.
That night, well it may have been dream, but I could see two headless figures holding a lighted torch making towards my house.
They stopped at the front door at my house. One was wearing a red cheongsam and the other was wearing a white cheongsam. I think they were trying to get into my house but couldn't because we were protected.
The next day, I went and told the medicine man what I had seen and now, they knew what the problem was. They took appropriate actions, players and everything to my little boy. Now, my little boy became all right by the end of it all.
One day, my little boy seemed disturbed and kept crying and mumbling. I realized he had been "disturbed" by someone. In other words, something spiritual was disturbing him, so I prayed hard that night and asked for a sign so that I could know what it was.
That night, well it may have been dream, but I could see two headless figures holding a lighted torch making towards my house.
They stopped at the front door at my house. One was wearing a red cheongsam and the other was wearing a white cheongsam. I think they were trying to get into my house but couldn't because we were protected.
The next day, I went and told the medicine man what I had seen and now, they knew what the problem was. They took appropriate actions, players and everything to my little boy. Now, my little boy became all right by the end of it all.
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Vincent TeoPlease help me to correct if I'm wrong, thanks!
One day, my little boy seemed disturbed and kept crying and mumbling. I realized he had been "disturbed" by someone. In other words, something spiritual was disturbing him, so I prayed hard that night and asked for a sign so that I could know what it was. This paragraph is very good.
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