Bsss10 Posted 20 years ago
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00 I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not. If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them. Thank you very much. 02 br
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01 font 00 1.Although some politicians withhold the fact that the fourth nuclear plant was built in the Ku Lien in the vicinity of active volcanoes from the public in order to gain their own interests, this kind of immoral policy could escape from legal sanctions. 02 br
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00 2. British paparazzi rode motorcycle to pursue Princess Diana's car and forced her to die in the accident car. Consequently, the public blamed British paparazzi for the death of Princess Diana. 02 br
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00 3. To increase circulation, Japan's media always violate journalism ethics for reporting a rich person or enterpriser has kidnapped by criminal organization, which indirectly kills the victim. However, legal system can't punish these immoral journalists, not to mention, put them in the jail. 02 font 0-
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00 I made some sentences, but I am not sure whether they are right or not. If you find something wrong in Grammar or vocabulary, help me check them. Thank you very much. 02 br
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01 font 00 1.Although some politicians withhold the fact that the fourth nuclear plant was built in the Ku Lien in the vicinity of active volcanoes from the public in order to gain their own interests, this kind of immoral policy could escape from legal sanctions. 02 br
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00 2. British paparazzi rode motorcycle to pursue Princess Diana's car and forced her to die in the accident car. Consequently, the public blamed British paparazzi for the death of Princess Diana. 02 br
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00 3. To increase circulation, Japan's media always violate journalism ethics for reporting a rich person or enterpriser has kidnapped by criminal organization, which indirectly kills the victim. However, legal system can't punish these immoral journalists, not to mention, put them in the jail. 02 font 0-
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02 br 02 br 00 1. Although, in order to further their own interests, some politicians withhold the fact that the fourth nuclear plant (in Ku Lien) was built in the vicinity of active volcanoes, this kind of immoral policy could [not] avoid legal sanctions. ) 02 br 02 br 00 2.
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0 Welcome to the forum, Bsss10! 02 br
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00 I would reword your sentences as follows. 02 br
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00 1. Although, in order to further their own interests, some politicians withhold the fact that the fourth nuclear plant (in Ku Lien) was built in the vicinity of active volcanoes, this kind of immoral policy could [not] avoid legal sanctions. (I'm not sur
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00 I would reword your sentences as follows. 02 br
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00 1. Although, in order to further their own interests, some politicians withhold the fact that the fourth nuclear plant (in Ku Lien) was built in the vicinity of active volcanoes, this kind of immoral policy could [not] avoid legal sanctions. (I'm not sur
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