Contiluo Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
The dandelion
Would anyone please be kind enough to check the following paragraph for me? Thanks !
The dandelion was blown to a city that has pollution troubles. It saw a little tree lamenting about her wretched lot, so he asked her “Why do you look so sad?” “I want to grow into a big, towering tree,” The little tree answered and began to sob out her sad story. “However, I think it impossible to realize my dream because I am grown in this polluted, barren land.” “Believe yourself. Never give up, and your dream will come true sooner or later.” The dandelion said. “Really? Can I do it?” the little tree stopped crying and surprisingly asked. “Yes, I have confidence in you.” The dandelion said. “Thank you. I will overcome.” the little tree said happily.
The dandelion was blown to a city that has pollution troubles. It saw a little tree lamenting about her wretched lot, so he asked her “Why do you look so sad?” “I want to grow into a big, towering tree,” The little tree answered and began to sob out her sad story. “However, I think it impossible to realize my dream because I am grown in this polluted, barren land.” “Believe yourself. Never give up, and your dream will come true sooner or later.” The dandelion said. “Really? Can I do it?” the little tree stopped crying and surprisingly asked. “Yes, I have confidence in you.” The dandelion said. “Thank you. I will overcome.” the little tree said happily.
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I rewrite the paragraph as following. The dandelion was blown to a city that has pollution troubles. ” “I want to grow into a big, towering tree,” the little tree answered, and began to sob out her sad story.
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I rewrite the paragraph as following.
The dandelion was blown to a city that has pollution troubles. He saw a little tree lamenting about her wretched lot, so he asked her “Why do you look so sad?” “I want to grow into a big, towering tree,” the little tree answered, and began to sob out her sad story. “However, I think it’s going to be impossible to realize my dream because I am growin
The dandelion was blown to a city that has pollution troubles. He saw a little tree lamenting about her wretched lot, so he asked her “Why do you look so sad?” “I want to grow into a big, towering tree,” the little tree answered, and began to sob out her sad story. “However, I think it’s going to be impossible to realize my dream because I am growin
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