Intruder84 Posted 14 years ago
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Dear Sir or Madam:
On behalf of my company, I would like to invite you to familiarize yourself with our proposal to start cooperation with [name of the company] real estate agency as regards obtaining properties with a view to continue our partners' expansion. Our activities are secure and efficient in terms of law. We match investors with suitable high quality products in Polish real estate market. We're permanently developing and analyzing properties with reference to the relevance of choice and parameters predetermined by potential clients. We collaborate on the strength of permanent agreements with reliable companies who want to sell properties to increase their own efficiency in the real estate market taking into account the following aspects: location, communication and technology. The properties we we look for are: properties that have high investment potential, commercial properties, dwelling houses situated in attractive areas.
Your potential gives us realiable grounds for possible collaboration with your company. We expect a successful working relationship in the future, therefore we look forward to receiving your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
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Kamil
Dear Sir or Madam:
On behalf of my company, I would like to invite you to familiarize yourself with our proposal to start cooperation with [name of the company] real estate agency as regards obtaining properties with a view to continue our partners' expansion. Our activities are secure and efficient in terms of law. We match investors with suitable high quality products in Polish real estate market. We're permanently developing and analyzing properties with reference to the relevance of choice and parameters predetermined by potential clients. We collaborate on the strength of permanent agreements with reliable companies who want to sell properties to increase their own efficiency in the real estate market taking into account the following aspects: location, communication and technology. The properties we we look for are: properties that have high investment potential, commercial properties, dwelling houses situated in attractive areas.
Your potential gives us realiable grounds for possible collaboration with your company. We expect a successful working relationship in the future, therefore we look forward to receiving your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
[sign with titles, addresses etc.]
Kamil
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Hi, Could anyone help me with this? Kamil
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Hi,
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The way this is written does not make clear to me what you want from me, or how I will benefit.
What would you say to me, as simply and quickly as possible, if we were talking face to face for on
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Hi Clive!
Thank you for help!
I just translated this text from Polish into English, and I wanted to know whether it's grammatically OK.
Thank you for help!
I just translated this text from Polish into English, and I wanted to know whether it's grammatically OK.
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