Nat_16 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
tenses
could anyone check whether the tenses are correct in this para?
I played quake3,resident evil 4,flappy birds(android) which are my favourate games.I felt more engaged to quake 3. quake 3 has challenges like how a player moves to a critical situation,taking advantage by fetching guns,the time to kill other players.The player is challenged by enemies that who will kill other by using their tactics.They tend to show off their way of shooting,running,jumpingetc.this makes the game more interesting.The rule of moving will decide who would win the game.like strafing,sidestepping,jumping,crouching.This game have best friction while jumping.It differs this game from others.The best goals of the game is to shoot the enemies with high accuracy percentage,to aim headshots with railgun,to aim at long distances and to finish the game first.
I played quake3,resident evil 4,flappy birds(android) which are my favourate games.I felt more engaged to quake 3. quake 3 has challenges like how a player moves to a critical situation,taking advantage by fetching guns,the time to kill other players.The player is challenged by enemies that who will kill other by using their tactics.They tend to show off their way of shooting,running,jumpingetc.this makes the game more interesting.The rule of moving will decide who would win the game.like strafing,sidestepping,jumping,crouching.This game have best friction while jumping.It differs this game from others.The best goals of the game is to shoot the enemies with high accuracy percentage,to aim headshots with railgun,to aim at long distances and to finish the game first.
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I find this entire post unintelligible, especially the first part with all the "quakes". Can you make it more clear?
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I find this entire post unintelligible, especially the first part with all the "quakes". Can you make it more clear?
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PhilipI find this entire post unintelligible, especially the first part with all the "quakes".I suppose that "Quake 3" is a video game.
Nat_16, these should be capitalised: Quake3, Resident Evil 4, Flappy Birds.
Also, you are making mistakes throughout with spacing. You need to put a space after a comma or full stop.
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