0 Hi,02br 00Please check this.02br 02br 00Diary writing of a Hypothetical situation:02br 02br 00A fire unfortunately broke out (had broken out -- good too, I think) at 10 o'clock in the morning. The people were scared and were hurrying to get out. Fortunately, I was not there -- I called ('had called in' is good too, I think) sick. How fortunate I am. Had I not called in sick, I would have been there and probably have been in the same situation. I came down with (had come down with -- good too, I think) a fever and decided (had decided -- good too, I think) to go to a hospital. It wasn't bad but my friend took my temperature and recommended me to go to a hosptital. I am in the hospital, lying on the bed. When my mother comes home at 6 p.m., I would (for me, 'will' be good if if certain) be well enough to celebrate my birthday. By that time, my fever will probably have been taken care of, and I will probably be blowing out the candles on the cake. Until then, I have to lie here to get better.02br 02br 00Any comments on this availability of past perfect tenses for all those situations? Would all those past perfect make a person dizzy going back adn forth? 0-
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0Hi,02br 02br 00A fire unfortunately broke out (had broken out -- good too, I think) at 10 o'clock in the morning. The people were scared and were hurrying to get out. Fortunately, I was not there -- I called ('had called in' is good too, I think) sick.
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0Hi,02br 02br 00A fire unfortunately broke out (had broken out -- good too, I think) at 10 o'clock in the morning. The people were scared and were hurrying to get out. Fortunately, I was not there -- I called ('had called in' is good too, I think) sick. How fortunate I am. Had I not called in sick, I would have been there and probably have been in the same situation. I came d
0Diary writing of a Hypothetical situation:(You are practising to make entries in a diary you intend to keep?)02br 02br 00A fire broke out at 10 o'clock in the morning. People were scared and were rushing out. 02br 02br 00Fortunately, I was not there as I had called in earlier for sick leave owing to fever. 02br 02br 00What a blessing i
0 Thank you very much.02br 02br 00It helps me greatly every time someone like you corrects the writing, but unfortunately, it might create a need for more questions. Can you please tell me why it is a good (or correct??) thing to use 'may' and not 'would' or 'will'' here?02br 02br 01font00When my mother comes home at 6 p.m., I 0
0 Hi,02br 01i00It helps me greatly every time someone like you corrects the writing, but unfortunately, it might create a need for more questions. Can you please tell me why it is a good (or correct??) thing to use 'may' and not 'would' or 'will'' here?02br 02i02br 01font00When my mother comes home at 6 p.m., I 01b0
I felt it was important to address this point before it got away (in my mind, htat is).
You asked:
Let me ask you this. In each case where you are considering past perfect, do you feel that the sequence of events is clear without it? If so, then don't use it, generally speaking.
Let me ask you this. In each case where you are considering past perfect, do you feel that the sequence of events is clear without it? If so, then don't use it, generally speaking.
Point-by-point questions usingwhat I wrote: A fire unfortunately broke out ((1) had broken out -- good too, I think Yes, but I woudn't say it's necessary)