Rajagopal Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Teachers over here can you help me out?
The below is my conversation with my friend, i just want to know where all i have committed mistakes?
Vignesh: ya da
when did u go?
11:49 AM
oh last sunday??? fine
me: we were there from sunday till this tuesday
Vignesh: oh fym
fyn*
me: we went for grandpa thavasam
Vignesh: oh ok
me: with whom is your thatha staying now?
11:50 AM
Vignesh: now in my house...
me: ok is he fine now?
Vignesh: he will go to my peripa's and chitappa's house too
me: so finally where is going to stay?
11:51 AM
Vignesh: in all his sons house
he has his things in my house, but stays in all house
me: that day he was so sad, he made his heart heavy to leave tiruvali
he was not well at all
Vignesh: ya ya ...
me: he fainted in the way i heard
11:52 AM
Vignesh: i dono.. no think
its because, he was there in that house for 91 yrs
me: hmmm i know its tough for ne1 to come all at a once
Vignesh: Right from his Birth he was there
ya ya
me: also i saw kumaresh
11:53 AM
he was there with his parents
Vignesh: ya ya
me: so will you ever come back again to tiruvali da?
11:54 AM
Vignesh: no da.. we will be visiting often..
no plans as of now to sell the house
so will be coming
me: ok its good to hear this
Vignesh: yup
me: will u b coming for panguni utsavam?
11:55 AM
Vignesh: dono da..
will tel that time
me: ok
Vignesh: k
me: have u cleared CA?
11:56 AM
Vignesh: nope
me: have u written it well?
Vignesh: ya da.. but failed
me: what is karthi doing now? still he stay in sutherland?
11:57 AM
don't worry
Vignesh: ya ya .. he is there only
Vignesh: ya da
when did u go?
11:49 AM
oh last sunday??? fine
me: we were there from sunday till this tuesday
Vignesh: oh fym
fyn*
me: we went for grandpa thavasam
Vignesh: oh ok
me: with whom is your thatha staying now?
11:50 AM
Vignesh: now in my house...
me: ok is he fine now?
Vignesh: he will go to my peripa's and chitappa's house too
me: so finally where is going to stay?
11:51 AM
Vignesh: in all his sons house
he has his things in my house, but stays in all house
me: that day he was so sad, he made his heart heavy to leave tiruvali
he was not well at all
Vignesh: ya ya ...
me: he fainted in the way i heard
11:52 AM
Vignesh: i dono.. no think
its because, he was there in that house for 91 yrs
me: hmmm i know its tough for ne1 to come all at a once
Vignesh: Right from his Birth he was there
ya ya
me: also i saw kumaresh
11:53 AM
he was there with his parents
Vignesh: ya ya
me: so will you ever come back again to tiruvali da?
11:54 AM
Vignesh: no da.. we will be visiting often..
no plans as of now to sell the house
so will be coming
me: ok its good to hear this
Vignesh: yup
me: will u b coming for panguni utsavam?
11:55 AM
Vignesh: dono da..
will tel that time
me: ok
Vignesh: k
me: have u cleared CA?
11:56 AM
Vignesh: nope
me: have u written it well?
Vignesh: ya da.. but failed
me: what is karthi doing now? still he stay in sutherland?
11:57 AM
don't worry
Vignesh: ya ya .. he is there only
Top answer
Hi; You have a lot of mistakes. First, your punctuation is incorrect. Second, you use "texting" shortcuts for words that are not acceptable in standard writing.
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Hi;
You have a lot of mistakes.
First, your punctuation is incorrect.
Second, you use "texting" shortcuts for words that are not acceptable in standard writing.
Third, you do not write in complete sentences, but in phrases.
You have a lot of mistakes.
First, your punctuation is incorrect.
Second, you use "texting" shortcuts for words that are not acceptable in standard writing.
Third, you do not write in complete sentences, but in phrases.
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I got through about three lines of your post before giving up. If you would like to re-write it in English, I would be happy to take a look at it. (Here are two hints: Almost all words in English have more than one letter! One important one-letter English word is always capitalized.)
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