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Last Saturday, Emily, Mike and I went hiking in the mountains. As we were on our way to the destination, Mike suddenly let out a shrill voice and said, “Look, everybody! It must be a UFO”. Emily and I were both frightened to see a disc shaped flying object moving fast high up in the sky. It was glittering and the reflections of light coming from within the clouds. We were alarmed at first but soon composed ourselves. We concentrated our attentions on the UFO, and Mike took out his camera to take a picture. However, the disc shaped craft submerged back into the clouds and then disappeared. What a pity!
Last Saturday, Emily, Mike and I went hiking in the mountains. As we were on our way to the destination, Mike suddenly let out a shrill voice and said, “Look, everybody! It must be a UFO”. Emily and I were both frightened to see a disc shaped flying object moving fast high up in the sky. It was glittering and the reflections of light coming from within the clouds. We were alarmed at first but soon composed ourselves. We concentrated our attentions on the UFO, and Mike took out his camera to take a picture. However, the disc shaped craft submerged back into the clouds and then disappeared. What a pity!
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Last Saturday, Emily, Mike and I went hiking in the mountains. As we were on our way to the destination, Mike suddenly said in a shrill voice , “Look, everybody! It's a UFO”.
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Last Saturday, Emily, Mike and I went hiking in the mountains. As we were on our way to the destination, Mike suddenly said in a shrill voice, “Look, everybody! It's a UFO”. Emily and I were both frightened to see a disk-shaped flying object moving fast high up in the sky. It was glittering and reflections of light were coming from within the clouds. We were alar
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