Speech writing

Hello,

I try to wrtie speeches because I member of Toastmaster clubs, May you read below speech and tell me how to improve my writing?

My dady

I wounder if my Dady Is her , would things been diffrent? would he mad it diffrent?

I lost my DAD 2007, first year i got work and graduate from college, i never give him a gift from my salery, and i never bought him a purfume. I lost him when i become a woman, and had feelings to Love and dreams to acheive.

You tell me would he make things diffrent?

you have your Dady may be so you may tell me better

A woman like me needs a true man in her life, a man can support her and care for her. a man who give and take.

All the men i meet in my life they were the taker type, they do not give any thing or simple things even. They know how to get what they want.

I was really mest up with this kind.

Now i am scared, and i do not know how to diffrentiate between them? the giver and the taker

between true man and a losser.

Some will tell follow your heart?

I have a problom with that, i have a sweat and honest heart. strong right but kind too. so i am scared to relay on my heart.

will Father take care of this? if he is alife would he make things diffrent?

I do not know

cous! i lost my Dady