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Anonymous Posted 4 years ago
Grammar

So/Which he did.

Hi teachers. I wrote this monolog for a story I'm writing. Three questions:

1) Does it sound natural?

2) Would you use 'so' or 'which'?

3) It is punctuated like you would have?

"He is a great friend. When I lost my grandma two years ago he showed up at the funeral to support me. He knew how much she meant to me so she meant a lot to him too, so much so that he insisted on helping carry the coffin, so/which he did. I'll never forget it."

  

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anonymous 1) Does it sound natural? Yes, if perhaps a bit breathless. anonymous 2) Would you use 'so' or 'which'?

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anonymous1) Does it sound natural?

Yes, if perhaps a bit breathless.

anonymous2) Would you use 'so' or 'which'?

Which. 100%.

anonymous3) It is punctuated like you would have?

When two independent clauses are joined by "and", a comma is mandatory. Don't they teach this any

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1) Does it sound natural? Yes. But "... she meant to me, and she meant a lot ..."

2) Would you use 'so' or 'which'? which

3) It is punctuated like you would have? Yes, except as shown above, and see advice in the other reply.