Someone please correct my sentence

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Hope my candy parcel is ready now when you are coming back to Sri Lanka.

Mister Micawber · Accepted Answer

I hope my candy parcel is ready now. When you are coming back to Sri Lanka?

Dilshi · Answer

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Someone please correct my sentence

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