Nessitas Posted 18 years ago
Grammar
Somebody correct my sentences please!
0 My weekend is very busy. On Saturday I wake up early because I need to go to the supermarket to buy fruits, vegetables and some more food. 02 br
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00 When I come back I must to cook, to washe de dishies and clear the home. 02 br
00 After have lunch, actually I take care myself, hair, body and face. Also I like to sleep for a wile. 02 br
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00 On the afternoon I cook some delicius food for to recieve my friends. All the Saturday they come to my home to study the God´s words, to talk and to be together. 02 br
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00 At nigth we go to the church . There is wonderful because we sing, dance and to read the bible, always have a big christian party. 02 br
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00 After that we go out for some reataurants, and there have more foods, laughs and happinies. 0-
02 br
00 When I come back I must to cook, to washe de dishies and clear the home. 02 br
00 After have lunch, actually I take care myself, hair, body and face. Also I like to sleep for a wile. 02 br
02 br
00 On the afternoon I cook some delicius food for to recieve my friends. All the Saturday they come to my home to study the God´s words, to talk and to be together. 02 br
02 br
00 At nigth we go to the church . There is wonderful because we sing, dance and to read the bible, always have a big christian party. 02 br
02 br
00 After that we go out for some reataurants, and there have more foods, laughs and happinies. 0-
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0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 00 My weekend is very busy. 02 br 00 After I have lunch, I really take care of myself, my hair, my body and my face. 02 br 02 br 00 In the afternoon, I cook some delicious food for my friends.
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0 Hi, 02 br
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00 My weekend is very busy. On Saturday I wake up early because I need to go to the supermarket to buy fruit, vegetables and some other food. 02 br
02 br
00 When I come back I must cook, wash dishes and clean my home. 02 br
00 After I have lunch, I really take care of myself, my hair, my body and my face. Also, I like to sleep for a whil
02 br
00 My weekend is very busy. On Saturday I wake up early because I need to go to the supermarket to buy fruit, vegetables and some other food. 02 br
02 br
00 When I come back I must cook, wash dishes and clean my home. 02 br
00 After I have lunch, I really take care of myself, my hair, my body and my face. Also, I like to sleep for a whil
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0 My weekend is very busy. On Saturday I 01 b 00 get 02 b 00 01 del 00 wake 02 del 00 up early because I need to go to the supermarket to buy fruit 01 del 00 s 02 del 00 , vegetables and some more food. 01 b 00 "some more food" is awkward perhaps you should just say "buy groceries" that includes the fruit, etc. 02 br
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