Sleep with sprawling, snug yourself, step to the side

Question

You have a room only three persons can sleep on the floor with sprawling, but if you make room and snug yourself four persons can sleep. There persons were already sleeping, I entered and asked the three persons in lying position "Could you people step to the side/move a bit, so that I can also sleep here?

Please correct my sentence and suggest me better versions too.

Clive · Accepted Answer

Hi,

You have a room in which only three persons can sleep sprawled on the floor, but if you make room ~~and snug yourself~~ four persons can sleep. Three persons were already sleeping there. I entered and asked them, "Could you people ~~step to the side/~~move a bit, so that I can also sleep here?

Please correct my sentence and suggest me better versions too.

There was a room in which only three people could sleep sprawled on the floor, but if they really made themselves small then four could fit in. Three people were already sleeping there. I came in and asked them, "Could you people please move a bit, so that I can also sleep here?'

Clive

Sleep with sprawling, snug yourself, step to the side

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