Moguwai007 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Simmons mattress
For a catchy expression used in a hotel brochure, which sentence sounds more natural and appealing?
1) Our rooms feature the world famous Simmons mattresses for a perfect night's sleep.
2)Our rooms feature a Simmons mattress for the perfect night’s sleep.
1) Our rooms feature the world famous Simmons mattresses for a perfect night's sleep.
2)Our rooms feature a Simmons mattress for the perfect night’s sleep.
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All our beds have world famous Simmons mattresses for a perfect night's sleep.
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Hi
2) sounds better. Few people, I think, book their hotel room because it has a world famous mattress. No harm in mentioning it, but best to keep that part short
Dave
2) sounds better. Few people, I think, book their hotel room because it has a world famous mattress. No harm in mentioning it, but best to keep that part short
Dave
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