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Contiluo Posted 11 years ago
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similarily

Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!

It happens that there is a similar case. ( Similarily ), last September, some Taiwanese tourists rented a car at a car rental agency and caused a traffic accident when they went on a sightseeing trip to Ishigaki, Okinawa, Japan. It was regretful that they run away without paying for the damage. The owner of car rental agency failed to claim a compensation for the damage which resulted in financial losses to him. Therefore, the owner posted a Chinese announcement on the official website, saying ”We’re considering no longer renting cars to Taiwanese tourists.”
  

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I would simplify it somewhat: It happens that there is a similar case. ( Similarily ), L ast September, some Taiwanese tourists rented a car at a car rental agency and caused a traffic accident when they went on a sightseeing trip to Ishigaki, Okinawa, Japan. It was Regretfully that they run away without paying for the damage.

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I would simplify it somewhat:

It happens that there is a similar case. ( Similarily ), Last September, some Taiwanese tourists rented a car at a car rental agency and caused a traffic accident when they went on a sightseeing trip to Ishigaki, Okinawa, Japan. It was Regretfully that they run away without paying for the damage