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Mr. Streetwise Posted 19 years ago
Letter Writing

Sick application letter

1b00Hello, Could someone please have a look at the sick application letter below for grammar mistakes, and weird sentences?02br
02b01i00____________________________________________________________________02i02br
00Dear Madam,02br
00The reason I was absent on Tuesday, February 13th, 2007, was I was seriously afflicted with gastric pain. I had been taken to a local hospital at 4’o clock in the previous night. The doctor had given me some injections, and had advised me to take some rest, as the energy level had been quite low.02br
01font00Therefore, I feel I should be allowed to use sick time. 02font02br
00Meanwhile, thanking you and assuring you of my efforts as ever I put in.02br
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00With great regards,02br
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00Sincerely,02br
00Name02br
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01i00____________________________________________________________________02i0-
  

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02br 02br 01font 00Dear Madam,02br 00The reason I was absent on Tuesday, February 13th, 2007, was that i was seriously ill with gastric pain. I had been taken to a local hospital at 4’o clock the previous night. 02br 00Therefore, I feel I should be allowed to use sick time.

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00I've suggested a few changes, followed by an alternative version.02br
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01font00Dear Madam,02br
00The reason I was absent on Tuesday, February 13th, 2007, was that i was seriously ill with gastric pain. I had been taken to a local hospital at 4’o clock the previous night. The doctor gave me some inje
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Dont be worried about that .
When you have time and good health then you can come.

See you bye
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