Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Should there be a comma in this sentence?
Program expenses are down $12,500 due to a decreate in kid fit staffing and less party staffing as it relates to the decrease in party rentals being done.
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Anonymous Program expenses are down $12,500 due to a decreate in kid fit staffing and less party staffing as it relates to the decrease in party rentals being done . My thoughts: You have issues with word choice but the main problem is you have too many clauses packed into the main clause which confused the core meaning of the sentence. Down - has negative meaning.
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AnonymousProgram expenses are down $12,500 due to a decreate in kid fit staffing and less party staffing as it relates to the decrease in party rentals being done.My thoughts:
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