Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Should I add this to my sentence to make it better?
I am writing a summary of a fantasy book for a class and am not sure if I should add the "that was" to this sentence to improve it and make it sound better.
Shortly after their arrival in Tarsis, the companions were split up during an attack on the city by the Red Dragonarmy and a contingent of blue dragons (that was) commanded by the Dragon Highlord Kitiara Uth Matar.
Shortly after their arrival in Tarsis, the companions were split up during an attack on the city by the Red Dragonarmy and a contingent of blue dragons (that was) commanded by the Dragon Highlord Kitiara Uth Matar.
Top answer
It's not necessary, but the sentence might be easier for your students to understand if it's there.
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It's not necessary, but the sentence might be easier for your students to understand if it's there.
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