Successor Posted 17 years ago
Grammar
Shortened sentence
Hello,
I'd would like to know whether the sentence below makes sense to you. There is a shortened sentence 'travellers looking for quality', but I am not quite sure whether the sentence structure is clear enough since another shortened sentence follows after the comma: 'offering a private environment'. This refers to the subject 'they'. Thank you for your answers.
They cater for discerning travellers looking for that extra touch of quality, offering a private, homelike environment.
I'd would like to know whether the sentence below makes sense to you. There is a shortened sentence 'travellers looking for quality', but I am not quite sure whether the sentence structure is clear enough since another shortened sentence follows after the comma: 'offering a private environment'. This refers to the subject 'they'. Thank you for your answers.
They cater for discerning travellers looking for that extra touch of quality, offering a private, homelike environment.
Top answer
I suggest you change the order: Offering a private, homelike environment, they cater for discerning travellers looking for that extra touch of quality. CB
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I suggest you change the order: Offering a private, homelike environment, they cater for discerning travellers looking for that extra touch of quality.
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